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My name is Emily, also i'm Chris.
I'm 17 years old, I'm new to this world.
I am a daughter, step daughter, grand daughter, aunt, cousin, and friend.
I watch movies, eat food, draw, laugh, cry, and generally fuck up.
I'm a drinker, smoker, a joker.
I look young an naive, but i have seen more and know more than ya know.
I have difrent identitys, some i hide behind to keep me safe.
I'm reckless and destructive, but caring and soft.
I'm weakness, I am strength, I am anything you want me to be.
I'm a boy, I'm a girl, transgendered, lesbian.
I'm nothing special but somthing like me has never been created before.
I bind, I pack, i let them free, I am me.
I am a round peg in a world of square holes.
I have been shouted at, hit, beat to the ground because of my looks and who i am.
I have been loved, porctected, and suported.
I know wht it's like to hide who you are.
I know what it;s like to be seen as somthing your not.
I'm emasculated, defeminized, I'm a girl even when i dont feel like one, i'm gay.
I have had my soul shattered, my heart broke.
I am me...
I'm 17 years old, I'm new to this world.
I am a daughter, step daughter, grand daughter, aunt, cousin, and friend.
I watch movies, eat food, draw, laugh, cry, and generally fuck up.
I'm a drinker, smoker, a joker.
I look young an naive, but i have seen more and know more than ya know.
I have difrent identitys, some i hide behind to keep me safe.
I'm reckless and destructive, but caring and soft.
I'm weakness, I am strength, I am anything you want me to be.
I'm a boy, I'm a girl, transgendered, lesbian.
I'm nothing special but somthing like me has never been created before.
I bind, I pack, i let them free, I am me.
I am a round peg in a world of square holes.
I have been shouted at, hit, beat to the ground because of my looks and who i am.
I have been loved, porctected, and suported.
I know wht it's like to hide who you are.
I know what it;s like to be seen as somthing your not.
I'm emasculated, defeminized, I'm a girl even when i dont feel like one, i'm gay.
I have had my soul shattered, my heart broke.
I am me...
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Their kisses leave you breathless.
Their body, mind and soul, fit yours in what can only be described as perfection. To say you're in love with this person, is almost an understatement. You adore them. Everything they are, and everything they do.
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I like a boy in my class, all the others are icky. Girls are better than them.
I am in forth grade.
Some boys are cute, most are weird. I learn I like girls. I feel scared and alone.
I am in fifth grade.
Only some boys are ok, alot are weird. I like a girl in my class. I tell a 'friend'. Rumors spread.
I am in sixth grade.
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I am a lesbian.
I am a lesbian. I am a lesbian.
I am a lesbian.I am a lesbian.I am a lesbian.
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i cant spell!! and spell check isnt working so yea! This is for all the teen suicides caused by bullying and being made fun of because there LGBT.
i cant spell!! and spell check isnt working so yea! This is for all the teen suicides caused by bullying and being made fun of because there LGBT.
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Overall Vision Originality Technique ImpactLet me start off by saying that this piece is magnificant, but there are many minor errors scattered throughout.
There are several grammatical errors within this piece, that really take away from the overall impact. There are many slight spelling errors that make it difficult to quickly grasp the meaning. Along with these, there are some minor awkward phrasing issues (affects the sound more than the ease of reading.) While this is a powerful piece, the grammatical errors can almost make it feel juvenile. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/f/f…" width="15" height="15" alt="
" title=" (Sad)"/>As for content, this piece is wonderful. A few lines stand out much more grandly than others: ex. "I am a round peg in a world of square holes." The lines like these are beautiful, but I wish that they were carried through the rest of the piece. They are vibrant, wonderful little gems that could make this piece shine much more grandly.
Overall, you seem to have written a fantastic, heartfelt piece, that lost some of its beauty to small mistakes. Great job. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="
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